tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post7677277395058508090..comments2023-06-04T10:48:17.814-05:00Comments on Punk Rock Poetry: PiecesKate Solohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06703901149715024366noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-31391994414189233482013-12-12T13:49:58.010-06:002013-12-12T13:49:58.010-06:00uhmm that word is meant to be "note" - m...uhmm that word is meant to be "note" - missing keys today. Sorry.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-2314017484724663172013-12-12T13:49:31.250-06:002013-12-12T13:49:31.250-06:00Yes not taking has changed but the act of doing it...Yes not taking has changed but the act of doing it hasn't. For some reason my ideas come in the bathtub or when first awaking. Sometimes I get them down before I forget, more often not. I like the idea of collage and breaking through inner walls to write the simple truth. It's a lifetime journey . Well done.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-27635940375046511922013-12-11T13:31:48.166-06:002013-12-11T13:31:48.166-06:00I used to keep a notebook of ideas but haven't...I used to keep a notebook of ideas but haven't been lately. Such a good idea to use your phone. Too bad mine's dumb! Ha!Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-59880566324796340812013-12-11T10:14:16.016-06:002013-12-11T10:14:16.016-06:00Damn! I lost my comment. I liked this very much. ...Damn! I lost my comment. I liked this very much. You find and knit back the pieces through your creativity. It's a better from of therapy.<br /><br />Also, the rhythm is interrupted in the first stanza. this "that I want to write about" interrupts the natural flow of your words. I think that rhythm should be tested in the mouth. Read your poem aloud and see if there are stumbling blocks for your readers. Otherwise, a lovely, evocative poem.<br /><br />Lady NyoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-16949737055485648912013-12-11T03:28:02.790-06:002013-12-11T03:28:02.790-06:00We all hope to find ourselves. And fear it to som...We all hope to find ourselves. And fear it to some extent too.<br /><br />(Editorial comment: verse 2, line 4: should read 'painting', I think.)J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-84093418110208127472013-12-10T22:57:28.938-06:002013-12-10T22:57:28.938-06:00you know... i find myself most in those broken pie...you know... i find myself most in those broken pieces when i write about them...makes them kinda visible and understandable to me...just saying...smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-17809393847960914472013-12-10T20:55:10.972-06:002013-12-10T20:55:10.972-06:00One shouldn't feel the need to explain themsel...One shouldn't feel the need to explain themselves... since we can't control how people take what we give them... I say, express it, then leave it all on the floor and let them build how they see fit... smiles... strong poem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-64621964787951113952013-12-10T19:33:15.999-06:002013-12-10T19:33:15.999-06:00Courage is now. Leap and the net will appear.
I...Courage is now. Leap and the net will appear. <br /><br />If it feels hard to do, you're on the right track.<br /><br />Cheers!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12823532229269308280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-68313308251850043112013-12-10T19:32:01.072-06:002013-12-10T19:32:01.072-06:00We are like living poems. It's all in how we ...We are like living poems. It's all in how we put it all together. Colleen@Looseleafnoteshttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-27015208726828189432013-12-10T18:54:45.154-06:002013-12-10T18:54:45.154-06:00explaining yourself to the world is a daunting tas...explaining yourself to the world is a daunting task...loved this poem.. it reflects somethings I struggle with at times...revelationshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07184644795582553870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-48385594007350182582013-12-10T18:51:04.074-06:002013-12-10T18:51:04.074-06:00What a frightening thought, to have to explain you...What a frightening thought, to have to explain yourself. I love thus poem, Katie. Very well written.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-83875464894884274322013-12-10T18:06:08.498-06:002013-12-10T18:06:08.498-06:00Well written and beautifully open Katie - I was to...Well written and beautifully open Katie - I was touched by this - Thank you... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.comscotthastiepoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266153714529613752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-30714580251829627242013-12-10T17:29:09.912-06:002013-12-10T17:29:09.912-06:00Well-written piece!Well-written piece!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-73805367229955095962013-12-10T17:24:59.319-06:002013-12-10T17:24:59.319-06:00smiles...explain yourself...or allow others to see...smiles...explain yourself...or allow others to see the beauty that all those broken bits can make in the mosaic of us?Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-16303445566269007852013-12-10T17:23:13.433-06:002013-12-10T17:23:13.433-06:00I already see the kind of honesty in your poetry t...I already see the kind of honesty in your poetry that I very much appreciate. You have found the courage, and I do hope you continue to write with that courage that you so admire in others!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-62208100474102109232013-12-10T17:21:43.646-06:002013-12-10T17:21:43.646-06:00A lovely share Katie ~ You write beautifully you ...A lovely share Katie ~ You write beautifully you know, smiles ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-27406160838509753982013-12-10T16:09:02.221-06:002013-12-10T16:09:02.221-06:00I think this is a great sentiment.. but in reality...I think this is a great sentiment.. but in reality the realisation has already moved you beyond any hesitation,brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-44195634088191156462013-12-10T15:41:05.931-06:002013-12-10T15:41:05.931-06:00Ah Katie, you are alraedy one of those people - an...Ah Katie, you are alraedy one of those people - and poems like this prove it ... smiles<br /><br />TonyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-11214460690968558582013-12-10T15:29:37.886-06:002013-12-10T15:29:37.886-06:00I wish I was one of them as well. I can relate wit...I wish I was one of them as well. I can relate with your sentiment. Well-penned.<br />-HAAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4052575234010589946.post-17704651365056241952013-12-10T15:09:28.629-06:002013-12-10T15:09:28.629-06:00eh, who says they need an explanation anyway. well...eh, who says they need an explanation anyway. well pennedAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com