Tuesday, November 5, 2013

A Poem a Day for November - Day 5: Me In 10

The prompt for today's poem was "Write a 10 word poem without using personal pronouns, make it personal." It's a lot harder than I first thought!! Ha! If you know one of my favorite bands (Ducky Boys), you can probably tell that I've been listening to a lot of them recently. Let me know what you think of this one! Thanks! :-)


Me In 10

Broken,
but not beyond repair.
Still damaged,
music soothes.
Progress.


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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 5, 2013 at 6:35 PM

    beautiful

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  2. Dorianna Ric (paintswithwords)November 5, 2013 at 8:09 PM

    I love this..in a few short lines, you showed stages of healing from the original break to progress in the healing and even illustrated the method use for the progression of healing..very well done

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  3. Colleen@LooseleafnotesNovember 5, 2013 at 9:27 PM

    Packed tight! Kind of like the six word memoir.

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  4. AnonymousNovember 5, 2013 at 9:59 PM

    Progress indeed. Music is healing; it can soothe. Well-penned. :-)
    -HA

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  5. Cressida de NovaNovember 5, 2013 at 11:13 PM

    Music certainly heals the broken spirit. I used to have a dog called " Ducky" when I was a child. Only in middle age did I realise the dog's name was "Darkie" English was not my mother's first language:)

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  6. PirateNovember 6, 2013 at 12:03 AM

    Word by word, note by note, step by step, a healing process...

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  7. Def_poet6November 6, 2013 at 5:48 PM

    very good 10 worder I think mine ended up like yours. It influenced me.

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  8. AnonymousNovember 9, 2013 at 1:16 PM

    excellent, katie ~

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